This is very good for first draft. Tidy up some parts such as the ending, fade out music. Advice: give the background more movements. change the colour of 'THE GRID' so the colours don't clash with sand.
Other than that, everything seems fine, keep up the good work !! :) -Sannie
This is very good for first draft. Tidy up some parts such as the ending, fade out music.
ReplyDeleteAdvice: give the background more movements.
change the colour of 'THE GRID' so the colours don't clash with
sand.
Other than that, everything seems fine, keep up the good work !! :) -Sannie